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Er. Isn't a haiku normally 5/7/5 syllables or 2/3/2 in metrical feet?

So the question is, why would someone have an abortion? There are two possibilities - firstly, because they don't want the child, and secondly because they'll be put at serious ...

You keep saying proof. Nothing is provable. We've already ascertained that.

while it may seem egotistical and pretentious It doesn't. It's worth liking, and taking pride in.

Yes. Since it's not done, all I can say for critique is to make sure you get the punctuation in.

Hola, Señorita. Firstly, some of the imagery was exceptional. The "project ceramic" line in particular caught my eye, but it was very good as a whole. Problems: rhythm. There were ...

I thought poetry was a complete waste of time - song lyrics 'till I die! - until a couple of years ago, when I got lucky and read this in ...

By the looks of things, he fell afoul of an unintentional "pre" tag; I reckon he's intelligent enough to know how line-breaks work :D

Alright, I'm going to try and keep this short, because I know I have a tendancy to rant/ramble. Poetry is, in its most basic concept - and with a few ...

:oops: well, thank you m'dear, but I'd never be worth catching in any case.

Yeah, pretty much everything important's been said, because there's only one main point - make it poetry. And then it might be better for the poetry section.

Firstly, double posting is bad form - after a long time with no comments isn't too bad, but half-an-hour later isn't really acceptable. Now, onto the poem: your main problem ...

I believe firmly that the rift between our bodies and spirits artificially imposed by religion is extremely detrimental to our selves and our souls. The Lady wants me to celebrate, ...

That's the one. Good for those of us who are incapable of getting through a whole thing.

So - not sure why - I was writing lyrics again. KINDLY LIGHT Everafter, I was a man of principle: left withal, left without, left with, her. Because I blue-skyed, ...