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GAOL Today I saw a flower crushed beneath the weight of life as if, a life were not a chance but chain, and all the world a man to put ...

Ah, I do like this. One point: capital letters at the beginning of every line? Especially when you've let the last one run on without punctuation, it makes it look ...

It was an interesting poem, this one, but there were a few bits that I wasn't sure about: she left me wondering why she left so soon It doesn't read ...