babymagic18

I'm really happy for you, you totally deserve this, way to go!!! :)

As he held her bloodied hand in his he could feel hot tears rimming his eyes but never would he let his other half see his tears. She rest against ...

it was very good you should keep up the good work i am right now working on a story I started a while back not sure if people would really ...

this is a good writing piece your a good writer yeah there were some mistakes but I won't point them out to you. Some people don't get that when your ...

You wouldn't take me; a twelve year old, 5'2, black hair, blue eyed angel to be a murderer would you? Reasons why you wouldn't you may ask? I get straight ...

this is a very addictive story it really drew me in like few story can do to me. Please continue I would just hate for you to end it like ...

I really enjoyed reading this the title really caught my attention thats good a good story should always catch the readers attention. You have a gift of good writing it's ...

It was a beautiful story you seem to really be into writing stories like this can I ask you a few questions? What got you into writing? Can you see ...

I loved the way you described the scenery it really makes you get a feel of the surroundings. Thank you for the positive comment I truly appreciate that it was ...

your writing is really something...I guess it's new to me I've never read a story on something so how should I say? (different). overall it was good.

I want to first say thank you to alll that read this piece I am proud of my writing and that is the reason I share it with others. I ...

this is very well written could you possibly give me some tips on how to make a story one that people want to read? thank you!

this was really good

thank you for your comment i'll try to do better with my writing your critiqing is fine don't worry about it.

um the story was good I just wanted to say thanks for the comment the rest of the story I am working on currently.