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I really enjoyed reading this piece it actually pulled at my heart strings. I read a lot of other peoples work but none like yours. It was really good. I ...

It was okay. You might have wanted to add the whole scene in their meeting and what in the moment of their meeting spark the flame between them. In the ...

I really liked this is was really something. Oh and thank you for commenting on my writing it was very much appreciated. I am going to try to work on ...

"So, what happened on the afternoon of October 31st?" the officer asked. I had to tell him the story which really isn't a story seeing as I really did see ...

Wow I won't even lie to you this waas really good I really got into the story and could mentally grab a picture from your words the way they all ...

well written I like your piece b/c it stays in onne place and doesn't have you all over the place losing the spot or trying to figure out who is ...

We had the most unforgettable,take your breath away moments in our marriage. I remember when we first met; I loathed him and I can't remember why. It was at my ...

Okay so this is only decent work it needs alot to it to really make others want more from you. You need to describe the girl her features whats shes ...

I really enjoyed reading this I was touched by this how many guys would really write like this and really follow through. You should keep up the good work maybe ...

I thought it was very well written I like a love story with a bit of drama to it. I feel it make it more exciting to read ya know ...

It all began five days prior to my fifteenth birthday. My mother and I had been shopping for my cousins graduation gift. What do you get a cousin you haven't ...

This was ok written just a tip of advice when you describe a person make them look believable and realistic. you want to draw the readers to the character not ...

hey that was a really good poem don't listen to what others say you know what your talking about I only wish I could learn to write poems the way ...

That was a really great story I really believe that you will have many stories published in your lifetime it's a great goal one I would also love to achive. ...

She stood on the boardwalk to lost in her daydream to realize the presence that stood only feet behind her. As he stood there watching her stare off into the ...