babymagic18

It was a warm autumn morning and I had been sitting in a wicker chair on the front porch. I was lost in my own thoughts and letting the gentle ...

I enjoyed this piece and I really liked the title it drew me in making me want to read it and thats what I look for when I am looking ...

Wow this is something different but thats good it's nice to read from a variety of thimgs. You might want to work on character though it could really use some ...

It was my first assignment on the job of journalism. With shoulder length black hair and almond shaped brown eyes charm was my specialty and I knew it would be ...

Oh wow this was good probably the best I've read in a long time. It made me want to read more. Your good. Keep in mind there are a lot ...

I like the title it was catchy. It caught my attention I likeed that. Just a reminder if you didn't know. If the story is lengthy the way your is ...

Noah Wilder would be the last name you put to the face of the man that stood nearly six feet tall, all muscle, with teal eyes that could cut right ...

well done a little lengthy but overall it was good. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Who is this he? and why is he in your head? Where were you going with this story and what were you trying to get the reader to see in ...

I liked it but it really was far too short of a start. It really needed to be at least a big paragraph or two paragraphs to really catch a ...

This was only okay because you put the description in but it was really all over the place and that's really not what you should do in your writing. If ...

This was well done. I could really use your help with my writing. So far I have been a failure in my writing pieces from what other people have said ...

It was good but you need character description. It is needed in all forms of writing without it you can't really get a picture of the things happening in the ...

I really liked the way you put it. It is the truth and more people in my opinion should realize that. it's in our everyday lives. I should have thought ...

I really liked your writing it flowed well. Yours was a piece I didn't want to read to qickly in fear I might miss something. Keep it up this was ...