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I wanted to thank you for reading my piece. I only stopped there b/c I didn't know what else to add that's all. But i liked your piece a little ...

Janelle racked the brush through her shoulder length blond hair debating to go to her cousin’s party or to just avoid the coming storm. No, she couldn’t think that way ...

I really should not be saying anything but I liked this I don't know how to write poetry but I thought I would give into reading one. Keep it up.

Uh, it was okay but it was really long and that can tend to draw people away from your writing and you don't want that. Other than that I liked ...

Wanted to say thank you for reading my piece it was nice of you and I appreciate it for a second time. Your work is well done. Oh, and another ...

Oh I just wanted to say thank you for reading my piece Adam and Eva. I just wanted to let you know that was only the beginning by the way ...

Adam, Its been three weeks since your leaving and with every passing day my heart feels heavier with loneliness for I can't help but to feel sick with worry over ...

I liked this piece it really drew me in and that's what you are looking to do as a writer. The title also caught my attention so thumbs up on ...

This was cute a little short but then again it is a diary entry so I really can't expect it to be long. Oh you might want to add a ...

“You know, you’ve still got time before you have to make your decision,” Mallor said. I turned my troubled eyes to look into his relaxed golden brown. It always amazed ...

uh? long much? Sorry you probably read that from someone else already. But it is the truth when you submit a piece you don't want others to look away you ...

This was interesting it was well written I must say. What I really liked your piece was that it caught my attention from the start it did not make me ...

The smell of blood chocked the air as I stumbled along uprooted tree branches and dead bodies. I could not quite fathom how it had come to this, this bloody ...

Oh i have to say I really emjoyed reading this, honestly. I'm not even a huge fan of anything that has to do with vampires but I must say you ...

It was good a little lengthy but other than that it was good I enjoyed reading your work. I can't say I really have anything to comment on. Keep it ...