babymagic18

Very well done it really told a story as with other poems i read i have no idea what they are talking about so way to go. keep it up ...

you have really given me new ideas for more poems so i thank you!

This was good I really liked it the way you drew my attention the title also caught my attention. I am pretty sure the others hit the spot with what ...

Cold fingers traveled the length of her bronzed narrow waist, an innocent mind becomes trapped with only a touch of his velvety soft kiss, his pure white fangs draw down ...

This is definetly something in which I have never read before it was very good keep up the good work. You make the readers want to read more and that ...

This is a very good piece. You only need to work on the paragraphs I feel they are too bunched up. Other than that keep it up.

I'm sweet I can even be used as a Valentine sweet Take a bite out of me In a little time I will grasp your mind and make you mine ...

I really enjoyed reading this. The title is very good. I liked the theme I have often thought of making a story with angels in it but I have no ...

I see how it is that you didn't win and lost to a nine year old. You have no description of the surroundings. I have no idea what the charaters ...

Deep within a forest haunted by stories of death and nightmares there stands a single cottage and within this cottage live three witches of great power named Silvia, Amethyst, and ...

This was okay I guess. I liked the title it grabbed my attention and that is important when you are drawing the readers attention. Other than that it was good ...

This needs a ton of work no lie. It all needs to be separated into paragraphs which will only make it easier for the readers to follow. If not then ...

Jocelyn you’re running and you are not running from me you’re running from the truth. You know what you did and I understand you are scared but I can help ...

I liked this piece the beggining had me drawn in and thats what I want when I'm reading so good job. I alos liked the title. The main character was ...

Um I really don't know what to say about this piece other than it needs serious work done to it if you really want people to read it. The title ...