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Re: Invitations: Prologue (1/2)
Incidentally, Freeda thought as she rolled over one morning to see a yellow envelope with her name on the front, I’ve nowhere to be. Interesting enough beginning. Already hearing the ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: The Lamentable Tale of Ben O'Rourke
Thankyou both. I agree I agree I agree. I have some editing to do! Does not mean I am not open to more crits, everyone else! Also message me if ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: The Lamentable Tale of Ben O'Rourke
Title is something I'm open to changing - I never think before picking a title, I just write something. Also this needs to be condensed. Ending is also subject to ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Through the darkness
Prologue This is a very different world than you and I know today. Technology has come and gone, along with the natural human way of life. The Apocalypse has happened ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: The Masked Musician
Her name flooded the headlines. “Gondola Girl is at it again!” “The Masked Musician Spotted Late Last Night!” Like she was some sort of twisted super hero, saving little children ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Hi from New Zealand
Thanks all for the welcomes! I know the critiquing drill, as I am a member on another writing site - harsh is good. Diplomatic is better. "gr8 stori lol! keep ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Hi from New Zealand
Hey I am Anna, I am 19 and live in the capital city Wellington, New Zealand. I just had a flashback to when I was a member here when I ...
Jul 9, 2009
