bElL3

Hello! I'll be your reviewer, and better yet, i'll be your first reviewer :) Okay, first thing that I had a problem with was the format. It was a little ...

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Hey hey hey!! You know I'll go ahead and get straight to the point. This piece is missing some things, nothing major and definitely nothing that a little editing and ...

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I loved it. That's all I can say. I was caught up from the very beginning, you really drew me into the story and had me guessing at what might ...

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First attempt at writing fantasy please give me your honest opinions and critique, especially harsh, is very much appreciated bElL3 Prologue- Departure He walked silently along the trail, stepping ove

I'm not going to nit-pick or anything since everyone else seems to already have done that, but also because I didn't really think anything was wrong with it. I relax ...

Polly opened the door cautiously, answering the feeble knock that had just occurred. She opened it wider when all she found was a trembling old man wearing a filthy poncho ...

Jack stepped outside on the porch, a cup of coffee in one hand, his hat in the other, and Kate behind him. She followed him to the steps, and he ...

I love the Mark of the Lion Trilogy by Francine Rivers (A Voice in the Wind, An Echo in the Darkness, As Sure as the Dawn). They're set back after ...

Waylon burst into the upstairs room above the saloon, dragging a thrashing waitress along by her hair and plumed headdress. Perspiration stained his skin, trickling down his face and neck. ...

Author's Note: this isn't all of part 1, I just figured that putting it all down at once would be so much more than it already is. Also, as stated ...

Hey, I'm Belle and I'll be reviewing your piece!! There are only a few nitpicks that I have with it. First of all, one thing that really stuck out to ...

I love it! i can't draw people even if my life depended on it so yeah i see this as some major talent! 8)