bElL3

Okay, well, I'm not a poet, but I do enjoy to read it although I don't know all the basic mechanics. I have to say I liked this one very ...

I found this piece very interesting. In a way it reminds me of Edgar Alan Poe, simply because of how eerie and dark it is. I thought it was poetic, ...

Chapter Three Ian’s hands trembled as he fumbled with the lighter. Sweat beaded on his brow, his head ached. He knew he had waited too long and was impatient for ...

“That makes absolutely no since, John. Umm... You mean 'absolutely no sense*' don't you? Other than that, great writing and even greater plot. Can't wait to see what happens next. ...

Okay, awesomeness, but I was wondering, since the title is "The Bolt" why not capitalize "Bolt" everytime you mention it since "the Bolt" is the subject and all? Overall, it's ...

okay, one really quick question? How do you edit what you submit? I can't figure out how to do it. Thanks to whoever responds. God Bless! bElL3

"our dyfunctional families were our common enemy" I have no problem with this phrase, I was just thinking it might sound a little more...poetic or maye flow better if you ...

Instead of "dish-towel-smelling waitress" why not go for something along the lines of 'sour-smelling" or "unpleasntly perfumed". I loved the way the rest of it sounds, although that part and ...

It was hilarious! They should spoof Twilight like they do on the Scary Movie series, Superhero Movie and all of those. Frickin' Great!

I'm going to agree with those that said that "squished" is the wrong word. If I were you I would consider revising and checking your sentnce structure, but over all, ...

Great piece! I was captivated right at the beginning. You described the rain and the storms beautifully, so.

Chapter One [i] I used to wonder, sometimes, exactly what it was that compelled me to wake every morning and live every day. I often awoke questioning my reasons for ...

Hey everybody! I'm new here! My name is Frankie Belle and I'm currently working on two project stories that I plan to publish! I'd love to get to know some ...