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Mom would kill me if she found out i read this, HAHA! But I do have to agree with Cynara. If I had known a person that long and became ...

DDDDUUUUUUDDDDEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's hackin' sick, but in a TOTALLY awesome way! I love gore! The onl

.2. Dom’s uncle, Sunny, walked into the coffee shop, coming to a pause when he saw his nephew’s slim body slung over the front counter, waist up. “You okay there, ...

I've read the first chapter already, that's how much I like this story. I was actually waiting for a second chapter to come up so I could see what happens ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to review me! I know the "And" is against the rules, but I like the way it sounded with the first three ...

A/N : I would just like to say, first of all to anyone who reads this, thank you so much for reading. But i would also like to explain something. ...

Don't ask why, but I teared up a little before I realized it was a dream. I honestly thought it was amazing. You have nice style and it flowed well ...

I'm guessing you like the Avatar? I do too, so don't worry. I liked this alot. I felt like it should have been apart of the whole Avatar series. You're ...

I liked this overall, but there was that little beginning sentence that bothered me. "Curiously Timid" doesn't really fit here. I believe the person above me covered everything else but ...

the person above pretty much pointed everything out. I have to say I think you're very talented. You describe the dark very well. I like how this piece flows together, ...

A/N: This isn't the rest of this chapter. My little sister was rushing me because she just HAD to play farm town. So if it seems rushed, it's because it ...

Okay, I like this but I just have to point something out here. If we're viewing the story through the characters eyes, then we shouldn't be able to know what ...

I'm sorry, but I must agree with the person above me. I felt it was way too verbose and desciptive. I think you should consider a revision, just to tone ...

I agree with scribblingquill, I loved this! I can tell you love to write. I admire your imagery here, too, I could picture everything in my head! Wow. All I ...

I drew this freehanded with a mechanical pencil and some colored pencils. What do you think?