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  • Art & Photography Re: Assorted Art 3

    I've been doodling around a bit with my prismacolors :) But first I think I should post the first thing I ever drew with them, as a tribute to the ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Metal Chapter One- Never Again

    A/N: I had this chapter with the prologue but decided to give it a place of its own since both of them combined seemed too long. Anyway, I hope you ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: We All Have A History Behind

    I had my coffee in my hand, I was just sitting there, looking to see what was pushing the door to reach inside. I was waiting for it; I knew ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Artist Arena "Horror" Contest Entry

    Nice :D So the only things that really stood out to me that could be improved were her hands. The one resting on her chest is flat and it seems ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Metal- Prologue

    Prologue Lightning lashed across the blood red sky like a whip across the back of a criminal. Thunder rolled and cracked, causing the atmosphere itself to quake. Frothing waves crashed ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Angel Mage

    You did this with just a mouse?! That's crazy, it's just about as good as the things I've seen done with a tablet. These kind of digital mediums aren't something ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Manga Girl

    Sorry I haven't reviewed anything of yours in awhile. With my computer still down, I haven't reviewed anything.. Anywho... Oh my goodness! :D She's so pretty!! Both of the pictures ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Assorted Art 2

    So I've got a lot of art that I've been working on, and I figured I'd post it here and see what everyone thought : ) First off, a wolf ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Logs Of Jeremy Edwards Ch.2

    After several weeks of continuous training, The remaining members of training group B Were dispersed among the companies of the 768th. Jonanthan Was assigned to Fox Company's 1st Platoon As ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Dreams Tell Lies Cover entry

    Oh wow that's gorgeous! My only suggestion would be to change the title font into something more elegant like a type of script, and to lighten its color a bit ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Logs Of Jeremy Edwards Ch.1

    IS it sad that the beginning kinda tripped me up a little and made me think I was actually reading something about a real person? Hahaha! Of course not! That’s ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Deleted

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    Aug 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hunted

    Hunted The blue sky was pale and clear, streaked with red from the coming dawn (I think you should reword this sentence a little… Mostly because you say, the sky ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hair Therapy 2

    Mechanical Pencils are one of my favorite tools, as well n_n next to a red Ticonderoga pencil with an eraser to sketch out guidelines. So anyway, on to the review. ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: I'm Blind

    HIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!! I realized how long it's been since I last looked at any of your art work and this one was the first one I clicked on in your portfolio. ...

    Aug 11, 2011


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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