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Hi! I don't like to comment on poems because I can't offer anything helpful! >.< I just want to say that the last line was heart-breaking, and that if that ...

It was December twenty-third. It was also the coldest night of the year, and a frosty blanket of snow covered the city of Seoul*. As the drunken crowds stumbled off ...

Hi! This piece was great! And I agree with the person above me, the aspect that most stood out about this story was it's future tense. Since you write everything ...

Hi! It's always cool to see essays uploaded here. I'll just get though the nitpicky details and then get to the good part! It started when the caveman had to ...

Hi! I'm going to be honest, I read your poem 3 times and still didn't quite grasp it. BUT don't worry, poetry has never been my strong point! (So it's ...

You know I'm going to pester you about this! :) You also know I'm dumb and so I'm probably going to make you spell every word out for me later. ...

When the World Throws Sh*t at You Lately, the world’s been throwing shit at me. Now, don’t get me wrong. Nothing huge happened. I didn’t lose a loved one, nor ...

I'm sorry, every time you mentioned "taking his shirt off" images of Taylor Lautner kept sweeping through my mind! :) Well written and creative, I do believe this is the ...

On the woody banks of Eastville, the St. Johns Hospital sat calmly among verdant trees, supple with new energy from the advent spring. The owners painted the building a slightly ...

Hey! So, the title was particular eye-catching, good job with that! (I saw afterwards that it was indeed your work) Anywayz, onto the comments! I feel that you really draw ...

Hi! Well, more than anything to criticize, I think I have more questions for this piece. First off, brilliant descriptions, you really manage to make us see this destruction in ...

Hullo~ Going to review really quick! Since I always start off with grammar, please don't be offended! I remember, that’s the big problem her. I think you mean here . ...

Hullo~ Hope this review helps. Just because there were a little nitpicky grammar errors, I'm going to talk about those first: It was a gorgeous time of year and my ...

LOL. I knew it was going to be something like this when I got your text... And, to make things worse, I'll update you on our ice cream adventures so ...

Woah. Well, I just want to say that I really enjoyed this piece. You manage to pack a lot of emotion in such a short story! Your style was very ...