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Hi! I'll review this as I read along. The first part with the two twin sisters fighting was endearing. That is actually how twins play (I know from experience) and ...

Hi! I'll be reviewing as I read along, so forgive me if I seem confused halfway through. This sentence was a bit too long. You should try to break it ...

I've actually seen this before in a drama. In that drama, this guy hires a girl to pretend to be his girlfriend, but then he actually pays her more later ...

Well, I'll be honest. Perhaps because it's flash fiction, but it's a little hard for me to understand. So, it seems like a very deep piece that hints at human ...

Hi, This was quite a head spinner! I liked the last two lines the best. This poem/narrative piece reminds me of that saying where they say love and hate is ...

This was a very interesting story. Overall, I like how you use one specific instance (the one where he is sitting and his mom is slicing tomatoes) to introduce a ...

The story is set in Korea during the mid 1940's. This is after the Japanese occupation, and a period of time where the country lay in strife due to opposing ...

Tae Yeon scrambled to tuck in her shirt. Many boxes littered her apartment floor, creating a maze that she zig zagged through clumsily in the dark. Checking the round clock ...

“What are you talking about?” Won Soo demanded, looking in confusion at Tae Yeon. “That wasn’t your manuscript? This is your house, Maru’s your dog!” Tae Yeon breathed, nostrils flared. ...

The sky darkened to an opaque blackness with only the occasional pocket of light spotting it. Tae Yeon pressed her foot down harder on the accelerator; she didn’t know driving ...

Wow, this was surprisingly ambitious. Since your profile says you're a guy, it means you tried to write the view point of a girl. The reason why I say this ...

Oh man, that was the question I was wondering. Whether or not you sent the email. You know, you probably remember the piece I put up. When you're just tired ...

Hey, just came back for the first chapter, lol! Also, the only mistake I noticed was that you spell Anna and Ana. Make sure to go back to that typo. ...

Hey...who said Chemistry was easy?! Lol, enjoyed this chapter. Although I didn't read the first one, I have a feeling I sort of understand what's going on. Which, by the ...

Darn. I hate how you always make me feel uncomfortable when I read anything of yours! That's a really powerful skill... I especially like the last stanza, because what you ...