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This is really good!! You have the makings of a great story here. You've identified the male MC's...angst, for want of a better word, quite well. The description of his ...

Fantastic once again!! I personally couldn't find any faults with it, but considering it's almost 2am in my part of the world, my eyes are a bit fuzzy :D The ...

Excellent still!! I'm really getting into this, hopefully you'll post more soon!! I'm curious as to Alex's past and who this other girl was. I like how you are keeping ...

Another excellent chapter!! I'm really loving this story, you've got a knack for it!! A couple of nitpicky things I found: 1. Greet the princess. 2. Make her feel welcome. ...

I've enjoyed reading this so far!! I think you've introduced both the MC's quite well, especially establishing Alex first and then Anita (Alex and Anita, it's a perfect fit :D), ...

This was really good! I'm looking forward to reading the next part and finding out what happens between Charlie and Scott. The openess between the three friends was really nice ...

I know I should have read the other chapters first, but I didnt'. *Sheepish* :wink: I liked this. From what I can tell the narrator obviously has some issues, especially ...

YAY!! I loved that. It was brilliant - once again!! I love the way you tell a story. The only thing really that I could pick out was the use ...

This was great, I really enjoyed reading it!! It's always nice to read how a crush first starts, and I think you captured that, even if the story is a ...

I enjoyed that!! Joss seems very snarky and against Edward AND Bella, it was good. Usually it's either one or the other. I'm interested to read more, especially Joss' character ...

Firstly, that was brilliant. What a great short story!! You really had me pulled in right there, from the beginning of aw, this is great how it's a geeky guy ...

This was wonderful!! I have read 'his' perspective yet, but I'm sure that if it's anything like this then it will be perfect. I don't actually have anything to fault ...

I loved it!! I'm a major Titanic fan, so reading this gave me shivers. Especially because it was written about real people, which I think is really great. I take ...