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Huge thanks to both of you for the reviews :D There are some really good points in both, and I'm definitely going to keep them in mind when I go ...

Thank you, Hiadel. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review, Julia! =] I feel like we learned all that punctuation stuff in ninth grade English, of which I remember nothing, so I should work on that. ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! Carelessaussie, I actually did no character planning at all for this, just got inspired to write about a nosebleed and it turned into this. So ...