attackedbyleaves

Hi! I liked this a lot. You really piqued my interest about why they're burning down towns/villages/etc. for fun, why lots of people seem to be dead, and who this ...

Hi! I'm really fascinated by mental disorders, particularly schizophrenia, so I'm liking the premise of this. The main thing I would suggest is looking into a script writing program because ...

Hi. I'm here to review, as requested. =] My advice is just to work on punctuation and capitalization, as you have quite a few errors regarding both of those areas ...

Hi. I figured I'd come review this since you reviewed mine. :) Airbear just hit everything I found to critique in this (except that in the dialogue Elaina screams, you ...

So first of all, I enjoyed this a lot and I'm curious about the world and the characters. I liked your comparisons and the detail you put into this, especially ...

I really liked this. I love nighttime. During the summer I just sit out there after the sun goes down; it's so quiet and peaceful. I thought the last stanza, ...

I liked this. Sure, the idea's been done, but hasn't everything? The characters held their own in this, and the boy didn't seem girly to me, something I've always had ...