attackedbyleaves

Hi! I liked this a lot. You really piqued my interest about why they're burning down towns/villages/etc. for fun, why lots of people seem to be dead, and who this ...

Huge thanks to both of you for the reviews :D There are some really good points in both, and I'm definitely going to keep them in mind when I go ...

I'm considering turning this in to my fiction writing class for a workshop, but I'm not totally sure yet. I need to tack on another page and a half-ish if ...

Thank you, Hiadel. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review, Julia! =] I feel like we learned all that punctuation stuff in ninth grade English, of which I remember nothing, so I should work on that. ...

Hi! I'm really fascinated by mental disorders, particularly schizophrenia, so I'm liking the premise of this. The main thing I would suggest is looking into a script writing program because ...

Hi. I'm here to review, as requested. =] My advice is just to work on punctuation and capitalization, as you have quite a few errors regarding both of those areas ...

Hi. I figured I'd come review this since you reviewed mine. :) Airbear just hit everything I found to critique in this (except that in the dialogue Elaina screams, you ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! Carelessaussie, I actually did no character planning at all for this, just got inspired to write about a nosebleed and it turned into this. So ...

So first of all, I enjoyed this a lot and I'm curious about the world and the characters. I liked your comparisons and the detail you put into this, especially ...

“Oh!” the woman said, wide eyes directed at his chest. Sliding down to his shoes. He looked down. Little speckles, these tiny red specs, they were collecting on the gray ...

How long can a character remain nameless? See: Fight Club. Exactly what I was going to say.

I was somewhere between five and seven. I have no idea what it was about, how long it was, or even if it was literate, but my parents still have ...

I really liked this. I love nighttime. During the summer I just sit out there after the sun goes down; it's so quiet and peaceful. I thought the last stanza, ...

POTAFan: Yeah, I think it was the 70s or 80s. Maybe before then, I'm not sure. Merry: Thank you! It's a reference to a video a guy named Spencer Bergen ...