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Alright! Hello, there! I hope you are having a wonderful first day of 2011. With a review from you, how can it go wrong?! I will not be focusing on ...

As always - I've chewed, swallowed (or tried to), regurgitated, chewed some more, swallowed, regurgitated and so on, and so forth - but I've really ended up with nothing but ...

The worm bit is supposed to be a reference to the play "Eurydice" by Sarah Ruhl. It is what Orpheus says/writes when he addresses a letter to Eurydice (who is ...

Sandman - rather, anything by Neil Gaiman. Especially Sandman. Or Coraline.

One word: YES.

First of all, Jay, the point was to make an "evil" speech to convince people and freak them out - as Azila pointed out. Second of all, I know all ...

A-Say-Chay

Sort of an exaggerated poem designed to cause more questions than it answers.

Hooray! Finally, a really good Harry Potter fanfic! You have annihilated my superstition that it's bad luck to make a Harry Potter fanfic - good job! Please keep writing this, ...

One edit, She looked about with a disapproving eye that made confetti cease and all fall silent. Maybe the confetti part should be changed to "cease falling". Otherwise, it's slightly ...

Right, but still, it helps to know what you could change to make it more real if you so choose.

And if you don't take out Jim was on his way to the fire department in Aflsadkdifra to clock in. then PLEASE change the name! It's way too hard to ...

the weirdness was sorta the point of the poem. it is a reflection of my inner pool of randomness. also, i think it would be less weird if you thought ...

okay, i think maybe i should get rid of the beginning paragraph, and the last line is odd. please critique.

yeah, the emoticons really detract from the story. also, you switch topics so fast that it really makes it hard to understand. the cat seems like she was the one ...