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One word: YES.

Hi! I've had an idea for a surrealistic screenplay floating around for a while, and would be delighted if anyone was interested. I am also planning on creating the movie ...

5) Hatchet, by Gary Paulson. Repetition + slow elementary school readers = boring class reading a crappy book out loud. STOP MAKING US READ OUT LOUD. We know how to ...

Okay, I absolutely loved the second stanza. The contrast...wow. A couple of things, though - your metaphors don't follow. You go from sky to fingers to fists to clichés, all ...

I wrote this after listening to Captain Ahab's "Was Love" too many times. And reading Girl Genius, and of course "This Vicious Cabaret" had an awesome related couplet. Once there ...

It's hard to believe that just one sound Not even loud, not startling, just a whisper Of falling leaves, of a faucet's leak, you're gone The grief won't go away, ...

@Shauni: Punctuality is timeliness. Punctuation is what Logan needs to work on :? But yeah, I agree. Making shorter sentences (and more variety in said sentences) would make this much ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Fortunately, they didn't like storks either and decided to be friends with me.

Fortunately, the cranes weren't evil, and they killed all the storks.

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

A mom who is actually the world's most infamous hacker, and makes chocolate chip cookies to DIE for. Mitch Reinstd.

Fortunately, they were nice cranes.

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

I think that doesn't go along with what I wrote