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This is good as far as information goes, but it doesn't work as a poem. It blinds my secular music This line doesn't work. It seems like it should (synesthesia ...

I've never been able to write in cursive quickly. Then again, I've never been able to touch-type quickly, either, so I still peck (I've gotten so good I don't need ...

I really liked this poem, especially the "silver dagger" bit. It started at his heavy heart at the chasm, the void, This seems overdone. with illusory emotion. I like this. ...

I liked the tiny plot in this story. Nothing really changed throughout its course, which I really enjoy. But...there are some issues that detract from it. We’ve been best friends, ...

The worm bit is supposed to be a reference to the play "Eurydice" by Sarah Ruhl. It is what Orpheus says/writes when he addresses a letter to Eurydice (who is ...

You and I walked Down dusty sidewalks. It wasn't romantic. I valued your opinions too much. We talked about poetry. You liked deep meaning, Or at least vague obfuscations. I ...

Zenzizenzizenzic. It is a word. This term was suggested by Robert Recorde, a 16th century Welsh writer of popular mathematics textbooks, in his work The Whetstone of Witte, published in ...

A young Native American girl.

So I can edit.

I love ducks! Now that my exclamation of love for the canard is over, I'll look at your poem. The swirling waters of love swirl waterly Do they, now. Do ...

not realy alive but not dead, The second part of that sentence is weird. I think that, if it weren't for the rhythm-ish you have, "not quite dead" would work ...

James Bond, only...only...better, dare I say? It sounds awful, but it's true, I'll sacrifice the main character's fortunes for less stereotypical plotline. something he'd been obsessed with That's rea

Slowly spinning a crystal wire Strung along with rainbow sapphires A lovely web that none may see... The tempting end for many and me. A spider writer spinning lies Creating ...

Sandman - rather, anything by Neil Gaiman. Especially Sandman. Or Coraline.

Okay, it's technically a graphic novel. It counts anyway, though :wink:. Plot It's Alan Moore at his best. Watchmen just had too much interconnected plot, while V for Vendetta had ...