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Fortunately, the new teacher was cooler and everyone liked her.

Fortunately, the misspellings became their real names and nobody cared.

Fortunately, everyone wore name tags!

Fortunately, it was a nice shade of purple.

Fortunately, it was a nice shade of purple.

Unfortunately, the makers of the drug weren't corrupt, and stopped producing it.

Hi! I liked the overall story, just a few errors I found: The man pressed the scanner to the cards quickly, eyeing the girls’ greedily the entire time. That should ...

And if you don't take out Jim was on his way to the fire department in Aflsadkdifra to clock in. then PLEASE change the name! It's way too hard to ...

Same thing as mtempleton. i thought you could have made Fred's death speech a bit less corny. it reminds me of movies where you're so embarrassed to watch that you ...

I think that the idea is really good, and a very original idea as far as the newspaper format goes. However, I think that the newspaper should sound a little ...

This is really good. You captured a dark mood very well, and built up suspence to just the right level. Although the beginning part could use some work as far ...

the weirdness was sorta the point of the poem. it is a reflection of my inner pool of randomness. also, i think it would be less weird if you thought ...

okay, i think maybe i should get rid of the beginning paragraph, and the last line is odd. please critique.

As I was prancing with the butterflies I got the urge to stretch my thighs And thus doing hit a boy with some french fries And in surprise I made ...

of course. what did you think, fesse?