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Re: Childish Things
I was six when It happened. I didn't talk about It for years afterward: at first, because nobody believed me, and then out of embarrassment. I had gotten one of ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: The Man Who Could Not Be Seen
Once upon a time there was a young man who lived with his uncle and aunt. His relatives were poor, but they were the boy's only relations, and so they ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Lost Love
We met during Christmas. At a party, you hosted Taught me the intricacies Of fine dining, of politics Of grand old ladies And esteemed old men. You dumped me on ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Forget Me Not: Prologue
Alright! Hello, there! I hope you are having a wonderful first day of 2011. With a review from you, how can it go wrong?! I will not be focusing on ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: When life gives you lemons... (a philosophy challenge)
Be pessimistic. That way, either you're right, or you're pleasantly surprised. (Actually, studies have been done showing that people are optimistic when they think they're being neutral - so, really, ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Ariadne stared at the blood red moon with her crystalline blue eyes. From the forest behind her, a wolf howled in impatience. But she had to pause and stare dramatically ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Toothpicks
I guess there's nothing to say but...this was really, really fun. Critique your hardest, people! I want to be a smoldering pile of ash by the time you're done with ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Forget Me Not: Chapter One
I decided to post another chapter since, on further review, the prologue was rather short. Which it was meant to be, but it was hardly enough to really grasp the ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Forget Me Not: Prologue
This is the prologue for a book I'm trying SUPER EXTRA HARD to write. I haven't managed to complete a large project in, oh, a year or so, so this ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Critiques By A Username That's Hard To Pronounce
Hey all! My name is Alic, and my store is open! Please post the following information: Title: Genre: Summary: Bid (points): I'll be reviewing the higher bids first, though I'll ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: And I’ll give you chocolate
As always - I've chewed, swallowed (or tried to), regurgitated, chewed some more, swallowed, regurgitated and so on, and so forth - but I've really ended up with nothing but ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Raindrops
Hello! I feel nervous :) First time asking for a review from a never-before-met person. Title: Spilling Out Genre: Dramatic Poetry Synopsis/Theme: Coping with destruction Link: Voila! Thanks very much
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Spilling Out
I'm going to rate this 16+ to be on the safe side. Spilling out Like entrails, Purple-black Strangulation Without any rhyme Or reason Just words on a blank White page ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Interesting Characters
I've seen this done too many times, and I think someone needs to put it out there. There is a simple way to determine whether or not a character is ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: And I’ll give you chocolate
So she hair rapes my face. What? 7. 7pm. What is the significance of 7pm. This should have a question mark, but I like the line :) He always said ...
May 4, 2010
