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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Childish Things

    I was six when It happened. I didn't talk about It for years afterward: at first, because nobody believed me, and then out of embarrassment. I had gotten one of ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Man Who Could Not Be Seen

    Once upon a time there was a young man who lived with his uncle and aunt. His relatives were poor, but they were the boy's only relations, and so they ...

    Sep 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost Love

    We met during Christmas. At a party, you hosted Taught me the intricacies Of fine dining, of politics Of grand old ladies And esteemed old men. You dumped me on ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Forget Me Not: Prologue

    Alright! Hello, there! I hope you are having a wonderful first day of 2011. With a review from you, how can it go wrong?! I will not be focusing on ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: When life gives you lemons... (a philosophy challenge)

    Be pessimistic. That way, either you're right, or you're pleasantly surprised. (Actually, studies have been done showing that people are optimistic when they think they're being neutral - so, really, ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    Ariadne stared at the blood red moon with her crystalline blue eyes. From the forest behind her, a wolf howled in impatience. But she had to pause and stare dramatically ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Toothpicks

    I guess there's nothing to say but...this was really, really fun. Critique your hardest, people! I want to be a smoldering pile of ash by the time you're done with ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Forget Me Not: Chapter One

    I decided to post another chapter since, on further review, the prologue was rather short. Which it was meant to be, but it was hardly enough to really grasp the ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Forget Me Not: Prologue

    This is the prologue for a book I'm trying SUPER EXTRA HARD to write. I haven't managed to complete a large project in, oh, a year or so, so this ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques By A Username That's Hard To Pronounce

    Hey all! My name is Alic, and my store is open! Please post the following information: Title: Genre: Summary: Bid (points): I'll be reviewing the higher bids first, though I'll ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: And I’ll give you chocolate

    As always - I've chewed, swallowed (or tried to), regurgitated, chewed some more, swallowed, regurgitated and so on, and so forth - but I've really ended up with nothing but ...

    May 5, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Raindrops

    Hello! I feel nervous :) First time asking for a review from a never-before-met person. Title: Spilling Out Genre: Dramatic Poetry Synopsis/Theme: Coping with destruction Link: Voila! Thanks very much

    May 5, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Spilling Out

    I'm going to rate this 16+ to be on the safe side. Spilling out Like entrails, Purple-black Strangulation Without any rhyme Or reason Just words on a blank White page ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Interesting Characters

    I've seen this done too many times, and I think someone needs to put it out there. There is a simple way to determine whether or not a character is ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: And I’ll give you chocolate

    So she hair rapes my face. What? 7. 7pm. What is the significance of 7pm. This should have a question mark, but I like the line :) He always said ...

    May 4, 2010


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