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You kind of miss out everything but that the MC is focusing on, and then even describe that only vaguely. If you have a certain object that is of some ...

Thanks for the quick reply meep!:)

Okay, So I'm half way through writing my book. It's posted on the YWS Action/Adventure forums, and I'm starting to think about publishing. I'll perobebly finnish writing the book before ...

It was a little long for me, but it had some good points. Thanks Jiggity!

Everyone is different, so everyone's characters should be too! Anyways.,.. if you start off wioth a cliched plot, then you can add in a neat twist at the end!

OKay, that was good! I think that that cleared a lot up for me! I'll try and use that when I write from now on! Thank you Evi!

Tank you for this. I'm always pounding on the comma key when I write. I know it's bad, but I can't help it. I might suggest adding in a paragraph ...

*Bookmarked* Thank you CastlesInTheSky!

Nutty is pretty good. She points out the bad stuff, and helps you fix it :)

Alyks (Alex) Feia (Fey-y-a) Just some random ideas. I have trouble coming up with names too!