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A short history on nearly everything -Bill Bryson Twilight series - Stephanie Meyers The Christopher killer - Alane Fergusson

Hi, this is my first story posted on the Young Writers Society Website, and I was just looking for some feedback on how to improve my writing technique and any ...

It didn't really draw me in at the start, and the ending was really straight-forward and short. To be honest, so was everything else. You need to expand on the ...

I just like the whole thing, the coming up with a good idea is the best part for me, and then just letting my mind wonder through all of the ...

Wow, that's a cool story! I find that when prompted with absurd topics I can write with adrenaline too, and just let my mind run wild!