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"Fine. Lets go and see Jack." Jack looked at me seriously. When did you find jack? he wasn't there a sentence ago? Anyway, we need more description!!! Imagine being at ...

WOW, you got a lot of reviews for this! it was a good story and I liked the plot line, but you, and a lot of other people on this ...

WOW, its great that everyones so kind here.Don't hate me beacuse I like school, I just like knowing stuff( and then showing off to my friends) last year I was ...

How could the boy see Ashy? “Whenever I freeze up like that, it means I haven’t taken anyone in a couple of minutes. They get longer the more I wait, ...

wow, that's a cool story, most of what i would say has already been said, but I'll do my best He stopped in front of a pastry store. It smelled ...

I just google image what I want my avitar to be on, and add ".giff" to the search, thats a quick and easy way to get icons, Then I same ...

" Y eah kind of . Y ou should see my sisters best friend s' family, now that's big" Changes in bold. Y eah sure Jake thought, but he didn't ...

Hello, My name is Asxz, and it looks like I'll get first review. Jake sat next to Zec at the back of their R.E class. next to the fire door ...

At the beginning, i thought toe was about 3 years old, because of the poking with a stick and bad grammar. I thinnk we need to know alot more about ...

Hi! The type of feedback that I want for this piece is: Any words/phrases/sentences that seem out of place or confuse you in any way. Anywhere that I need to ...

Hi, I'm back, I'm sorry if I was harsh before, and this next part might sound harsh too, but there isn't anything as bad criticism! Sorry for the double posting, ...

Hi, I'm asxz and I will be your critique I had a fairly big advantage by starting at the age of eight; where as most girls started at age twelve. ...

Hi, I'm asxz and I will be your critique I had a fairly big advantage by starting at the age of eight; where as most girls started at age twelve. ...

Caults (Reuben A,I don't think you can add a letter)

Haha, I love this one!