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I don't know anyone called Elaine. :smt021 TPBM's answer is negative... (He he)

"God, this guy is a genius" - commenting on Karl Pilkington's idea of sprouting little babies in 78 year old women, I'm not weird BTW

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Banned for liking David Eddings

Yeah, that really helped, thanks :). It didn't sound harsh to me at all. I know I always mix up the tenses, and so I went over it again, but ...

well, I liked it, but it was no way near the sheer awesomeness of the first three. I wouldn't recommend reading it if you love the series as it is, ...

Wow, that was touching, you should enter it in "The Activism Contest" Check it out, I think you would win for sure! especially because it was written on personal experience, ...

hey, this is great... It's very descriptive and uses great adjectives and metaphors! Now onto the nit-picks: Now I’m not here to merely spit criticism and unleash a riot of ...

Hello... I recently was required to construct a short story from a childhood memory. It was for a school assignment, but this isn't what I handed in. Alas, it is ...

Hi, I'm Asxz, and I get to be the first to welcome to you to the forum! Basically, you came here to introduce yourself, so why don't you tell us ...

Welcome to YWS, Its awesome and you will love it here. If you have a cool picture or short clip on your computer than you can upload it to be ...

Ha ha, my geeky moment was when I started reading my older brothers year 13 science book, when I was only a year 9 ;) My friends came over one ...

sorry, I coundn't actually be bothered reading it, as I hadn't really read the first one, and I don't have much time. But don't worry about it being long, that's ...

hi, I found no nit-picks after what has already been said. The climax of the story was great, and I don't think at all that you ruined it by making ...

Thanks alot you two, they were helpfull critiques!