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H, I just found myself noticing the lack of emotion and descriptiveness. It was a good story, and it had a well defined plot, but I think it was more ...

OMGOMG!!! please, hurry up and write the next one! I cant wait! PM me !!!! *gives third gold star* you are so going to be a world renowned author one ...

Cool, I want more... gimmegimmegimme, I'll read the next part now, but just so you know, that was amazing! i can't really see it being a chapter though... i think ...

WOW, sorry to quote all of the others, but you have talent! really, you should keep on going with this! Can you PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PM me when the next part is ...

Hello, can someone please review this???!? I'm getting desperate!

this is some good writing, but I don't think that you should continue the story like thins. The entire first chapter might be alright, but the diary thing will get ...

No matter what stands in your way you will stand tall (But without my brothers I would have fall) These two sentences sound off, try and re-work them. (I will ...

Awesomely written. great and captivating first sentence, some backstabbing/i meant trickery in the end... all of my nitpicks were already taken... Good work!

PLEASE REVIEW!!! RIP IT TO SHREADS PLEASE !! All reviews welcome. chapter 1 and prologue availible Here: Prologue Chapter 1 part 1 Chapter 1 part 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Cool, I'm in!

Done and done, hope you like it... anyone else???

Hi, replying to your will review for food post... First up, Readability the first sentence just didn't cut it, I had to read it a couple of times, then I ...

Nope... the person below me is over 15

Banned for saying that writing is hard

Any reviews... NOTHING?!?? can I at least get some answers to my pol then?? Appreciated :P