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Banned for being self-complimenting

Someone once told me while ago, that I had a trait of seeing things for what they really are, and always picking on the fine details. should be... Someone [s]once ...

Okay... the reviews are looking good. I'll have to start reading it then! are all of the chapters this long? that's probebly a good twelve pages or so. you should ...

EVERYTHING CAN BE EXPLAINED BY SCIENCE! [/rant] sorry about that, but I am a believer, just not of any real religeon! I love science, and I can truely say that ...

that was cool I wish that I could see something like that. i don't mean to sound insensitive to the sparrow, as I do feel sorry that It had to ...

Yup, I don't mind how long you take, i'm just looking for pointers, so if it takes you a little long, then as long as its a good review, I ...

Chapter 1: Confessions Dear Diary, I'm 14 years old and a freshman at Parkway South. you don't need to explain stuff like this to your diary! I don't really have ...

Hi, this looks good enough for a review! The ghost sphere gleaming upon his dark face, I hint of madness flashed in his malteeser eyes. I dont get it :( ...

It doesn't matter... just fix up any spelling, grammar, or other mistakes. if you have microsoft word, then you can turn on the 'track changes tool' by pressing 'ctrl' + ...

Thanks June... Will do!

Hi Pippiedooda, thanks for the PM! “Well I’ll take over now anyway. Have you given her anything to drink?” There should be a comma after "Well" * * * Once ...

hey I think that it's pretty good for a first poem for a speaker of another language. I think that the rhyming could be a bit touched up, and the ...

Hi, looks like a good story, I shall review :lol: I sucked in a deep, panicked breath and abruptly sat up in the bed I was lying in and smack ...

HELLO, THIS IS THE NEXT PART OF MY BOOK, SPLIT PPERSONALITIES (OPEN TO A NEW TITLE!!) ENJOY! I was snapped out of my reverie by a tap tap tap on ...

Huh, same for me. It's like eating a cookie, and then you get to the end and all of the chocolate chunks are gone, you try to enjoy it, but ...