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Hello, this is the discussion thread. umm, Discuss!

Pretty good, and I don't usually get/review potery! *GIVES GOLD STAR!*

yrclever, I am not really looking for point, because I got the 50 from your review, but if you want to, then feel free! Vivacious, I have done your review, ...

Please review! Don't care how long you take... just want to know what you think. Be as harsh as you want, and could you please use the 'track changes' tool ...

Hm mm, no-one for me... I don't get why everyone obsesses over celebrities. They're just normal people, and most of them can't even act. Sure, you can argue that they ...

Hmmm... I don't really get it!:smt017 She was giving her child away, but what's this about a parasite... Is the baby a parasite? Did he die of a parasite? You ...

Hi, I will lay off the grammar, but I would just like to point this out. "Your , your not human." Hmmm... First of all, it should probably be something ...

Okay... I'm no dream expert, but I shall review! Just in the corner, a large, greasy cardboard box.. sanctuary. We climb in, Emily and I, and close the top flaps. ...

Hi, Looks like I get to review! First of all... when the delinquent THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE middle brother Charlie returns home. NewCharlie Hm, not sure if there ...

*Gold Star* Nice work! Couldn't find any nit-picks here. Sorry, I don't get the last line either. Might want to get rid of the vocal cords but! Good script!

Hi, I will lay off the grammar, but I would just like to point this out. "Your , your not human." Hmmm... First of all, it should probably be something ...

is there any other secter than A & P? it just feels like there should be more... any way, the only nit-pick i have is this “Actually, little Jordyn’s going ...

Pretty good... you look a little worried in the second picture though...

Happy, happy, happy! That's the way I am, Laughing, grinning, giggles! I smile because I can! Love, love, love! That's my favorite thing, Hearts, flowers, chocolate! I swear, I could ...

Hello, I'm working through the book, I'll be done some day! I shook my head. Very very unlikely. Should be... I shook my head. Very[ comma ] very unlikely. * ...