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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue

    Sure, just Make sure it's relevent to teh story, and then it'll be fine!

    Feb 14, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Will Review Anything!!

    Done and DONE! Next please!

    Feb 14, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue

    You did slant the words! you might just want to have it as a famous quote or something, from another book... or a famous saying. I've read books like that, ...

    Feb 14, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue

    Here's the review you asked for! In which we meet two men, the shepherd and the lamb. Hmm, not too sure about this. You should put it in quotation marks ...

    Feb 14, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Will Review Anything!!

    Sounds cool ^.^ I'm on it!

    Feb 14, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Split Personalities 3.1

    It was like watching a horror movie. Sitting, watching, and relaxing. But at the same you’re terrified. It’s dark and stormy night, thunder thriving in the background. A reprehensible mass ...

    Feb 14, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Graphics Template

    Hi. This is me fiddling around, trying to make a Template/Letterhead thing for my graphics work. Just want to see what you guys think... Not to sure about the colours ...

    Feb 14, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Will Review Anything!!

    Hey EmmVeePi, good story! You'll be happy to find your review posted under the story! Keep the reviews coming!

    Feb 13, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Last Good Man

    Wow, okay long story, pretty impressive for your first post. Here is the review you asked for! Oh, If a walking stick could talk. If a walking stick could talk ...

    Feb 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Instinct chapter four

    Couldn't find anything wrong with that! Good work!

    Feb 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Instinct chapter three

    The town school was a bus journey away from the peaceful rural area of my home village, to the grey dull buildings of the town. Not quite sure that this ...

    Feb 13, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Will Review Anything!!

    Hey, thunder_dude7, the review is posted... I don't really like doing lyrics, but that was my best! Thanks for using my free service!

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Shine

    Hi, here's that review you asked for! How was I such a sensation? This line has one too many syllables, you just have to work around that :] And you ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Archive Re: Boys VS Girls

    Name: Steve Sanders Gender: Boy Age:9 Magical Skill:Controls the elements... this means that he can build thing. It takes him a short time to construct stuff, (like half an hour ...

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Archive Re: Scandal from the inside

    Disregard that last post, it's now at the beginning. Keep the applications coming

    Feb 9, 2009


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