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Nutty is pretty good. She points out the bad stuff, and helps you fix it :)

Okay, first of all, you're really good at drawing! I could never draw like that! and the sketchiness is not bad, it makes the legs look well defined and the ...

Three more please, and then I'll start us off and explain what's happening in the discussion thread!

sweet! this is my first story book, so I suppose that I'll just post what's going to happen next here, and then you can put your character in that situation, ...

Can we get a little more people please? And then we'll start!

Yeah, reading back on it I kinda get it, I just wasn't really in the mood a while ago. This is posted in the 'Lyric Poetry' forum, so I think ...

Review done. Anyone else?

Hi! Here's the review you asked for: They all look [INSERT COMMA] but do not see; Just read through your work and put commas wherever you take a breath. Reveal ...

Done! Cool prompt

Alyks (Alex) Feia (Fey-y-a) Just some random ideas. I have trouble coming up with names too!

Hey, Here's the review you asked for! I take a single step backwards, my foot striking something I cannot readily identify. As my leg slides out from underneath me, I ...

Hello, Looks good... I shall review! First of all, what you have here is a preface, not a prologue. These thoughts came to me just as death itself faced me ...

Hey! Thanks for the PM! I couldn't find anything wrong, you had me enticed all the way through... I can't wait 'till the next part! Keep going. The only thing ...

I'm trying to write something creative. Something original. Something nobody has ever though of before. Including me. ^.^ should be thought. There's school, of course. That's always a bucket of ...

ha ha, Were you just reading the prologue for Shepherd and lamb? Because I was, and I just thought of that when you said "Killer next door" Any-who... I can ...