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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1

    Hehe, I just thought I might put this in here!

    Feb 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1: **First Edit**

    Hi, review as requested. I have had a quick glance over it, so here goes... :arrow: Okay, opening sentence: Six teenagers ran into a pitch black yard, on a revenge ...

    Feb 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Writing about writing

    Hey! Thanks you two. I will fix it up... now. I couldn't be bothered going back and editing last night, so I will do now!

    Feb 23, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Can't even spare a piece of my mind

    Thanks Meep(: Looking foward to it!

    Feb 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Writing about writing

    Hi, this was a competition entry to the writing about writing contest. I came up with this in lie... 5 minutes and I couldn't be bothered erasing it form existence, ...

    Feb 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Will Review Anything!!

    Right, I'm up to date. Anything else?

    Feb 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: For The Girls: Chapter Four

    SLUT! (Sorry, I just had to say) Anyway, I had no objections to this chapter. You might want to describe how the music made her feel, and more about the ...

    Feb 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: For The Girls: Chapter Three Continued

    “Yeah and you should see this spread. I didn’t know there was so much stuff you could put in your hair and on your face. Don’t worry Veronica, when Keith ...

    Feb 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: For The Girls: Chapter Three

    I'm sorry, but Anti-pop has already done a great job. I didn't even notice whalf of he things that she pointed out. Good work!

    Feb 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques

    Hi, you reviewed me before... I'm back for another! [Link here] This is the prologue for my story, Split personalities, I worked real hard over the weekend and I practically ...

    Feb 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Need A Review?

    Hi, I think you reviewed my work? Anyway, I have re-done the prologue for my pending story, Action/Adventure fiction, Link here! THANKS SO MUCH!

    Feb 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Pleading to a Wet Sun

    Hi, here is your review on demand. >>I have to say thst you have some beutiful imagry in this poem, you have descriptions far better than I could come up ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: For The Girls: Chapter Two Continued

    hi, i'm getting there! I'll be done soon! He didn’t know the political structure of South East and perhaps he found scrawny brunettes attractive. At the end of the day, ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Mystery Man

    Hey. Asxz''s review for food at your service. I jumped the queue here because the other is a chapter book, so here goes. >>I would say that the eyebrow is ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Chemical

    Feb 22, 2009


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