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Okay... Hi! I'm really sorry I took so long, but my homework started to back up... well, you know the story! :arrow: First of all, you're starting paragraph is good. ...

Okay, first, I want to point out, as many have already done, that you should review 2 pieces of work for everything you post. This just helps to balance out ...

Name: Stven Marks Age: 23 Gender: Male Race(human or mutant): Mutant Appearance: Place of Birth: New York, the Safeway Abilities/Ability: He can manipulate his surroundings, such as making someone bel

Thank you so much... I have terrible grammar! I have a really bad problem with semi-colons as well! Thank you!

Come on... I'm getting bored now!

Hi, could you please review?

Hi... could you please review this for me? [Thank you]

Thank you ashlee, although i don't mind how long it took. Thank you for reviewing!

Okay... could you please review this for me... there isa prologue, but it doesn't have to be read. Thank you! Title: S.P. 1.1 / S.P.1.2 Genre: Rating: Zilch link: Part ...

Thank you! That did help a lot! (P.S: I'm not a good as writer as you, Pippiedooda)

Hi! The main post has been edited... Thank you for all of your reviews everybody!

Hi! I have re-edited the chapter segment, and it is now changed... Thanks for the reviews!

Thatnks sakura! It helped!

Thanks hippie! I never thought about having it in the past... Well, I guess that's what you're here for!

The blood goes everywhere because she is running, blood pumping and all that. aslo, if you read that parts one after the other they have *** inbetween them... I wasn't ...