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Hey, I really like your style. You have a very solid voice, one that seems to be made for entertainment. I couldn't help but notice you are a science geek, ...

Go nerds! This was amazing. Couldn't imagine reading it as a book, like the hitchhikers guide to the galaxy. My brain might explode, but as a warning poster this was ...

Uhhh... that's... Wow. Very differnet perspective than I'm used to. I have to say that it was kind of... interesting. I got lost a few times, and the first half ...

Okay, Hi! First, I'll introduce myself. I'm Asxz and I'll be your reviewer. I'll give you a grammar, line-by-line nit pick (spelling, too). Then I'll give you an overall review. ...

I'm sorry, I tried to make i obvious. It was a ransmitter... radio comtrolled poisin that they were breathing in in the air. Too complicated?

Written for 12 year old boys, so excuse the lack of description. Perhaps pointers on how to make it more exciting? I appreciate you reading! Mr and Mrs Keels walked ...

Okay, so i intend to do a quick review because this is a quick piece. First of all, I liked it. Very nice. Even though it's short, it has plot ...

Okay, so I've already read Chapter 1, and I just want to stop there to say: EMOTION! You need to have more emotion in your writing! There's such little... I ...

Okay, thanks for the PM! I get what you mean about these not being as exciting as the prologue, especially as the begining paragraph isn't too flash. I would say ...

Hi there! I shall review! First of all, I like the way you have the beginning, the very beginning, I mean. Like, how you tell us the time and place. ...

Okay, so I like the idea; a group of bandits hijack a boat, but they're so stupid that they end up being their own death. Good idea, but your writing ...

Yeah, that's fine. Glad to hear you like it... enough to review, anyway.

Cold feet! It's the middle of summer, and I've got cold feet! EURGH! Stupid New Zealand! EDIT: Forgot to post a question; Why did you become a writer?

Because it captures your soul and you have to go back to see it! Do polar bears get lonely? EDIT: Beaten to the punch. Sorry.

Because mystical heart deamons were unleashed upon the world after the second world war. They find someone particualry appitizing and feed on their happiness.Once that's all gone they are left ...