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Okay, so here's the deal. About a month ago I started writing a blog. It wasn't a normal blog, more like a fictional novel that I would add to everyday, ...

You could perhaps relate this back to life... like you make me whole or something... maybe? Okay... perhaps not, but you could! Just some general things here: I have a ...

All I can really comment on is the fact that you should have a comma at the end of each line, and a full stop at the last line for ...

Everyone seems to have beat me to it, but I'll say this: When you two main characters are in their granfathers attic, or whatever it was, you should make it ...

Okay... look, I'm sorry. I have to g to bed. i started reading, and it looks like you have some really long sentences, but I like that. you have adistinct ...

Hi, I've made some changes to grammar, so I'll save it in a word doc. and attatch it. I'll go over the story again soon, and tell youm what parts ...

Okay... mainly, you need to add character to your character . By what I have read, she seems one-sided and not at all human [or angel... whatever] It seems to ...

Okay guys... I'm on it. I was away at a hockey tournament this weekend, but I should be done by tomorrow evening, if not tonight! Oh yeah... we came first... ...

Hi... sorry it took so long for my rebew... I forgot to check the WRFF forums... Well, I'm here now, so Here goes! Your first sentence if good. I like ...

I have recently posted a new romantic fiction piece and all the reviews I have been getting are good, and thats it just good. I need some one to give ...

tommorow was a few days ago... Lets try and do this myself then! The dinner was delicious! I never thought that there would be anything better than the apple crumble ...

Come on guys... don't let this die!

I so overuse them when talking... I use it to show that I'm thinking... yeah. So... How's it going?

banned for having a palendromic amount of reviews.

I ended up putting: CAKE IS A L IE It looks fine on the cup, but I had to get rid of the 'the' because it made the writing very ...