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Okay, so this first part is a dream, I want to know if you think i should take it out or not. Thanks for reading! I was standing in front ...

Huh... it was a very good story. i swould only say that you could make the story more beilievable. For example, how did the evli people know that he had ...

Okay, i just read the story and i thought that it ad potential, but you have to stop the whole 'SHUT THE BOOK!' I don't like it when people shove ...

Ah... sorry if those links don't work, here are some that do! [part one] [part two] Uhhh... they should work! Thanks for telling me!

Hi! I would like you to review my story. It's chapter four in a book that I am writing, but at the begining of the first part there is a ...

Thanks for the quick reply meep!:)

Okay, So I'm half way through writing my book. It's posted on the YWS Action/Adventure forums, and I'm starting to think about publishing. I'll perobebly finnish writing the book before ...

Hi, I think I've asked you for a review before... it might have been the prologue for this book, way back in febuary. I would like you to review my ...

Hi! I would like you to review my story. It's chapter four in a book that I am writing, but at the begining of the first part there is a ...

Thanks for the review, Crouching Tuna. I do think that you had some odd corrections there, mixing up the tenses. The entire story is supposed to be in past tense, ...

Yeah, I have read the hunger games. Just recently, actually. I might have the beginning changed around, to get rid of the running away part, and she's just beign sent ...

Okay, I'm back on the service!

Hi, this is the senocd part of my fourth chapter in my first novel... with me so far? The rest; prologue part one , two and three , chapter one ...

Ok so, lets review this story. I think you obviously know what I'm going to point out first. The first three chapters, what was up with those? I don't mean ...

Please and thank you! Chapter 4 [precie at begining]