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I liked it... but I wasn't sure what you were talking about. Was it talking about humanity ruining the earth, and we need to band together to stop it? Or ...

I'm sorry to say that I don't like this. There wasn't much point,it wasn't written well and it was all over the place. My suggestion: It was my first day ...

I liked this. It explains what God is, why yoiu believe in him and what he does. I think you might get a placing for that (but.. you have to... ...

Okay, first I will say that I lied this, as it explains what God is, why you believe in him (Even if you don't have leukaemia) and it has a ...

I'm npot christian, and I don't really believe in the 'god' that loves us eternally. But I started this contest because I want to know why you believe in God, ...

I like it... but you write like you would talk. A few times you put the word 'like' in too excessively. You also tell us everything, and it moves too ...

I like it! I have a friend who's father is away a lot, and her mother drinks, and... She told me today that her mother had stopped, so it seems ...

I'm not sure what to call this... It's based on a true story of me and my fried, but all names [Apart from Ed. Cullen] have been changes around. I'ts ...

OKay, so i had a quick skim, and I feel that I need to know more about your character. You are explaining it to us, in a way that makes ...

Haha... thanks for the review! I'll work on it!

Hmmmm. I interesting. I like this, but it kind of moves too fast. I think the begining of a story should be more spread out, and you start pushing these ...

Okay, I started this thing a while ago, and i wanted your guys' opinion on if I should contiue! I don't want ANY nitpicks... i know, my grammar is terrible! ...

Thinking of saving it... but I'm still 4 years our of college, and with my current job I'm getting 3 grand a year, which upscales to more than 6 grand ...

Okay, so I never spend any money, and I have just got a better job (upscaled from a paper run to the local supermarket's deli) and I don't really have ...

It happened so fast that it even startled my Instinct. At once she was in control, running cross the room the door I had entered through. Behind us I heard ...