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9/10 I like it. And I don't like those kinds of stories usually. *** Sophie Stuart thinks she's an ordinary girl. Then she finds out that she can manipulate peoples ...

Reason for Writing: I write to make myself happy. I like reading what I write and being able to say 'I did that!'. I also like getting my friends ro ...

You know you're a writer when you want to drop English because you don't learn anything, and your teacher gives you detentions because you don't do your work. Then she ...

Thanks Dreamwalker! I know it's bad, so that's why I've put it on here! I'll go back soon and try to polish up what you've addressed here! -Asxz

Okay, this is the first story I've posted on YWS in the last few months, so I don't think it's very good. Be warned; it has some disturbing parts to ...

Hello, my name is... I'm not actually too sure! I'll call myself Kate. I don't officially exist and there are twelve of me.

You kind of miss out everything but that the MC is focusing on, and then even describe that only vaguely. If you have a certain object that is of some ...

You know you're a writer when you constantly feel the need to re-write your friend's (She says she's 'better' at english than you, but she's so stubborn that you give ...

Hello, me again, reviewing for your review that you won in the competition. They’re too close to five and five is better. They're too close to five. Five is better. ...

Hmmm... Many people have reviewed this already, but I will anyway. We'll call it a 2-for-1 deal, as I can see that the second piece is reviewed a lot already. ...

Hi outofthebox! I'm here to complete one of the reviews that I owe you! Nitpicks up first: I do it so well, pretend to be an all-American little girls with ...

Is turners syndrome when you don't grow properly? There's a girl in my hockey team who has that, and she was telling us about hoe she had to take shots ...

I like it, but it seems to me thnat you (or the viewpoint of the song) are a bit shallow. You haven't talked to him, but you think that it ...

I love it! If only I could write poetry, I would be proud to give my mother something like that! My only suggestion is to make it run better by ...

I didn't notioce if ti was written badly; I was too engrosed to notice. I don't think it was written badly... hang on, I'll check. Nope, It's written well. I ...