astrogemini

Me, I thought it was awesome. Have you ever been on that plane? I just feel like it's right, like there's no deeper meaning, it just is. I know it ...

You see I can't do that. I want to have an ending before I do a story, but I usually end up changing the plot and the ending and even ...

That was surprisingly helpful, I'll incorporate your ideas into my writing. Thanks alot, now I have more to work with. --Greg

I found no mistakes, but I wanted to comment anyways. I'm not the best at reviewing, but I'll give you my honest opinion as a man. That was pretty cool. ...

I just finished reading the last one, and I have to say this is pretty nice. I like your style. The boy Philip is a very interesting character and the ...

She was starting up the ship. She gave me her phone number, it’s not like she owed me or I expected her to take me home with her, but this ...

“Damn, he left me,” I said. But at the same time I was a little preoccupied. “Long time no see Liz…or should I say…” Vincent was about to blow my ...

I jumped the gate and I was tired. I had my orders, and I was told about a competing agent but never expected direct interference, by the Organization. I was ...

I left Matt’s. I knew I wasn’t supposed to be out this late, but then again when wasn’t I up and/or this late? I climbed through my window just in ...

There was a knocking at my door; I didn’t even need to open it to know who it was. “Hey Matt.” It was Greg, but he had changed since earlier ...

Before he was murdered, the old man, already sickly and old, decided his new-found relatives were undeserving of his fortune. He had decided to give it to a poor family ...

You commented to one of my posts, so I looked around and found this. It was something that I could dive into without it taking hours. In other words, I ...

This chapter was better than the first, and you left it off at a good point, I really want to see more.

I don't usually like short stories, but yours is really cool. I'd like to see more, it's an interesting little story. Keep up the good work. --Greg.

Maybe it should be an introduction instead.