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thanks a lot for the great review. i know it wasnt my best work, but you really helped me narrow some things down. i would have really liked to make ...

A NOTE: i know this is not the best story. it doesn't make a whole lot of sense, and there are some problems that will probably be pointed out. i ...

Ms. Figly’s exterior was innocent. Her small face was wrinkled and sweet. The elasticity of her eighty four year old face had worn out, and it sagged, giving her a ...

i really liked reading this. it has a wonderful flow and a superb word choice. it also has great emotion and it sounds as if a lot of work was ...

this is a very good poem. it has emotion, good word choice, and i actually understand it, not like some idiotic poems. i am not usually much of a poetry ...

this is a very good story. the writers thought it out and planned it. (obviously) snd it helped the tale, instead of making it more boring and plain. it was ...

i couldn't agree with you more. twilight seems easy, almost juvenile (not book 4) compared to harder novels. it is not really what i would call "intelligent, original" material. i ...

this is the best. i know that isnt helpful but i have to go. get it published!

the burwood tale-prologue is the best work ever. i only wish this writer had written more. it was enthralling, captivating, and overall the best piece of writing in a long ...

Misfit circus is an intelligent story written by intelligent citizens. they wrote a well- compiled, well-organized, and overall well-thought out piece of work. truly this story is a work of ...