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  • Other Poetry Re: On Top of A City

    sometimes a lack of punctuation is done on purpose because people believe it adds to the work. have you ever read pygmalion? he does that so many times it isnt ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A B C...

    first of all, it was really a neat idea to do the abc theme, it brought something new to poetry, although i wouldn't really know if it was new or ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Archive Re: Primeval Awakenings

    as for creatures...how about some sort of puppet thing? maybe a porcelain doll? possibly a mutant creation of robotics, dolls, and mirrors?

    May 28, 2010
  • Archive Re: Primeval Awakenings

    Name: Pippy Twotuck Gender: female Age: 11 and 12 months Appearance: bouncy ginger hair, petite, light freckles, short, wears light, comfortable clothing. Personality: sweet, caring, loving, has a sli

    May 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream: Chapter Five

    ime llamo nadia!

    May 22, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: PRIUS

    hey, thanks! those were really helpful; i made the changes in a word document, but ijust want to get it out there: i am so ashamed of profiling! pshh, yeah, ...

    May 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Crawl (Scarlett fires comp) [12+ for minor violence]

    i actually didnt read this; i was scanning the pages for my own story and noticed that you had said a "Honda Prius." um, this is a little awkward, but... ...

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost Childhood

    this is a moving story. i thought at first, "well this is not really poetry," but i continued reading and found it profound and devastating. i just am wondering if ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story

    sorry, but IS there going to be another part? i would like to know about it. don't want to ask too much, plus my review was long and not that ...

    Mar 3, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story

    let me just get one thing off my chest. love the ending. i really like how juliet ended up unhappy and rueful. that is so refreshing from a story. i ...

    Mar 3, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: poetry

    first of all, i would like to mention that i really appreciate the use of verbs in this poem. when i read this at first, i thought that maybe you ...

    Mar 2, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Love is Impermanent

    plopping down, the single sound, the one that makes the courter cry. the room will drown, their feelings down, the affects of the lie. young girl, so sweet, so innocent, ...

    Feb 25, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: virgin kiss.

    i like it. sorry, that was dumb; let me start again. i like the way this piece rolls. i am not sure if you intended it to be quick, or ...

    Feb 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Soul to Sound

    this is a moving poem. i noticed that it is in present tense. you stuck with that the entire time, which is actually quite impressive and difficult. now, some people ...

    Feb 25, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: PRIUS

    Hello. I am aware that this is and extremely long post. Sorry, enjoy! One girl could make a difference. She just didn’t know it yet. The girl: Willow H. Fields. ...

    Feb 25, 2010


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