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Re: On Top of A City
sometimes a lack of punctuation is done on purpose because people believe it adds to the work. have you ever read pygmalion? he does that so many times it isnt ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: A B C...
first of all, it was really a neat idea to do the abc theme, it brought something new to poetry, although i wouldn't really know if it was new or ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Primeval Awakenings
as for creatures...how about some sort of puppet thing? maybe a porcelain doll? possibly a mutant creation of robotics, dolls, and mirrors?
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Primeval Awakenings
Name: Pippy Twotuck Gender: female Age: 11 and 12 months Appearance: bouncy ginger hair, petite, light freckles, short, wears light, comfortable clothing. Personality: sweet, caring, loving, has a sli
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream: Chapter Five
ime llamo nadia!
May 22, 2010 -
Re: PRIUS
hey, thanks! those were really helpful; i made the changes in a word document, but ijust want to get it out there: i am so ashamed of profiling! pshh, yeah, ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Crawl (Scarlett fires comp) [12+ for minor violence]
i actually didnt read this; i was scanning the pages for my own story and noticed that you had said a "Honda Prius." um, this is a little awkward, but... ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Lost Childhood
this is a moving story. i thought at first, "well this is not really poetry," but i continued reading and found it profound and devastating. i just am wondering if ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story
sorry, but IS there going to be another part? i would like to know about it. don't want to ask too much, plus my review was long and not that ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story
let me just get one thing off my chest. love the ending. i really like how juliet ended up unhappy and rueful. that is so refreshing from a story. i ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: poetry
first of all, i would like to mention that i really appreciate the use of verbs in this poem. when i read this at first, i thought that maybe you ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Love is Impermanent
plopping down, the single sound, the one that makes the courter cry. the room will drown, their feelings down, the affects of the lie. young girl, so sweet, so innocent, ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: virgin kiss.
i like it. sorry, that was dumb; let me start again. i like the way this piece rolls. i am not sure if you intended it to be quick, or ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Soul to Sound
this is a moving poem. i noticed that it is in present tense. you stuck with that the entire time, which is actually quite impressive and difficult. now, some people ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: PRIUS
Hello. I am aware that this is and extremely long post. Sorry, enjoy! One girl could make a difference. She just didn’t know it yet. The girl: Willow H. Fields. ...
Feb 25, 2010
