ashleymae

Remember capitalization! I have seen a few errors in that area, as well as spacing. In one part, you put the same word twice, which is uneeded. When you put ...

I just absolutely loved it! But, I unfortunately must offer you a minor correction; when there is a conversation going on, please make different paragraphs for each person speaking, it ...

I have to admit that at some parts I was so confused, but at others, I was not. You do have an excellent story, I should add. In my opinion, ...

Really? Where is it? The actuall story telling I mean. Do you really plan to get anything out of a one sentence thing? Seriously, you really need to post something! ...

The Highlands, Scotland 1191 A year passed horribly for Harlana and Gawaine after what she had done. Her knights had been freed but they refused to leave their lady. So ...

Nice, a murder mystery, but as though I love the thought of your writing, I believe it can be better than what you now have it. There were a few ...

I enjoyed it, there is no question about it. It was packed full of all the stuff I love the most and look for in a story of any kind. ...

[quote="GhostlyImpressions"]I have one flaw with it that I may just pick you to pieces apart, and that is the constant use of "then".[/quote} I agree with GhostlyImpressions because the constant ...

I, personally, loved it. Maybe it was the fact that your novel made me think often of the always amazing and great Doctor. If you don't know, let me explain. ...

I thought it was very good and interesting. I too am a fan of the Robin Hood legend, which is now no longer legend, but history. There is a list ...

The Highlands, Scotland 1190 Harlana Galbraith stood solemnly in the castle’s solar. She leaned on the stone wall, slightly gazing out the opened window. The sky was gray and it ...