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Re: A Beautiful Mess
Oh wow...I didn't know you were british! :D That's sweet! So, you say Pyjamas??? Is it still pronounced the same?? That is so cool if it is....I love people who ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Run - Chap. 1
Sylverdawn: Thanks for the review! I did try to make it as though they are in a totally seperate world, as if the earth is totally different then it is ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth [Chapter Two]--Edited
KJ: Thanks kels! Yeah, I really struggled with the whole "how to get Dara to like Karson?" thing. And yes, you are a freak with Punctuation! lol jk :D But ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
Leahweird: Wow, thanks for the great critique! :D My MC is a girl too. I'll try to clear that up more in the beginning. Yes, that situation between Isadora and ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth [Chapter Two]--Edited
Scasha: Omgosh, I just read a Tamora Pierce series "Trickster's Choice & Trickster's Queen" and an idea for a heroine story popped into my head! :D I love Pierce with ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Wrong or Right? (Chapter One)
Well, it seems Overeasy has covered everything so it seems I'm out of a job... On to chapter two! :D
May 6, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
Perra: Omgosh, thank you so much! :D This is great! That passive stuff makes so much more sense now. I wasn't really sure what you were talking about :oops: but ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth [Chapter One]--Edited
KJ: Thanks so much kels for your LONG review! Gosh, when did you have time for that? Seriously! But anyway, it helped a lot but and maybe I'll print out ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Behold A Pale Horse
Conrad Rice: Yeah, I have no idea how you change forums. Maybe PM Nate or something. He'll tell you how. Or look it up in the search bar. Also, my ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth [Chapter One]--Edited
Yeah, I totally will! Don't worry! :D
May 4, 2008 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth [Chapter One]--Edited
Hey, scasha : Thank you so very much for your review! It helped a lot and I changed the things you suggested so hopefully it looks better! :D I know, ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: At the Crossroads
Hey, that works too! :D
May 4, 2008 -
Re: It was the perfect day...
Alwaysawriter: Thank you so much for that! It is always nice to hear someone who really likes your work! :D I do plan to reword some things and make it ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: It was the perfect day...
Aedomir: Hey, thanks for your review. I can't view it right now cause my computer won't let me but I will check it out and let you know what I ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: At the Crossroads
Oh, well I just assumed because it was so good! :D Well, by the ending, it seemed to leave the reader hanging so I just kind of assumed that it ...
May 3, 2008