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Merry_Haven: Yeah, I wanted to put some comedy in there. Everyone loves a good comedy :wink: lol But yeah, I like the Beatles myself, so I was like, she should ...

Merry_Haven: Gosh, I get back from going to Kamp Dells for four days with my family, and you are just making my day coming back here. Seriously. You are too ...

Merry_Haven : Yeah, she is pretty happy for Carmen/Nora. I guess you will see later like how that whole relationship went downa and other stuff similiar to that. Isaac is ...

Night Mistress: Sorry, Bri!!!!! Gosh, I really am bad at that, aren't I?? ehhhh, I didn't PM anyone! Whoops...:? Well, thanks for reading. And I guess you will have to ...

KJ : Wow, I think you just made my day...maybe my week! :wink: lol And I'm pretty sure there will be mistakes. I always do have some! :lol: Well, thanks ...

Merry_Haven: Yeah, this chapter was basically getting into the characters personalities and really trying to make each one unique. Carmen/Sophia's past will be cleared up in later chapters and the ...

Merry_Haven : You are too sweet! :D Thanks a bunch for taking the time to read all of these. It means a lot!

deavarna_satina: Oh, you are very welcome! :wink: I'm glad you liked it so much and thank you for taking the time to read all four parts. I promise to continue ...

deavarna_satina: Thanks for being such a big help! :D You seem to be touching on all the issues that I myself are struggling to protray so I promise I will ...

KJ : Thanks for the help! :D I will keep that all in mind. I am hoping to start to do a rewrite soon but I am going camping for ...

Night Mistress : Okay, do you think the ending was cheesy though?? I mean, I didn't want this to be a chessy love story. I wanted my MC to find ...

Night Mistress: Thanks! :D But I think I will need to do even more editing still. I don't think it's quite right yet...

Night Mistress: lol I am actually done with the fourth installment if you want me to post it. I think I actually will now :wink: Thanks for reviewing!

Night Mistress : Thanks! Yeah, I wanted to completely break the mold and try something new. Thanks again for reading!

Angel of Death: You are too sweet! :D That reivew was so nice! Thanks a bunch. I'm glad you enjoyed this so much.