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Re: A Whisper in the Wind (3 of 4)
deavarna_satina : Oh, thanks, Hailey! I worked hard on this. I mean, it still has a long way to go but I think I have a start at something that ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: A Bittersweet Tragedy-Preface
Okay, Merry, I’m back! :D Sorry it took me so long to re-review it... Even the tree branches had large, clear snow crystals that hung from it. First off, before ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (4 of 4)
*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (3 of 4)
*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (2 of 4)
*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (1 of 4)
*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Out of Focus--By: Margaret Buffie
alwayswriter : I totally suggest rereading it. It is THAT good! :wink: I think that book almost had me in tears at a couple of spots so that's huge for ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (1 of 4)
Amniba : I know. Flaws, imperfections, all that jazz is something I need to work on. I promise that I will add stuff like that. I am working on the ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - chapter 3
Well, this chapter seemed to have less mistakes. You seemed to have caught them all before I got here. :wink: But I still did catch a few… He was very ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter Nine
KJ : I'm sad!? lol You know you liked him! jk haha I am too funny.... But anyway, of course I will check out By Sun, By Moon. I'll go ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (4 of 4)
Merry_Haven: Wow, what a complement. Really. I am so flattered right now. And you are so welcome. I'm glad this story touched you. And thanks for reading all of them. ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (3 of 4)
Merry_Haven: Yeah, I really aimed to hit the reader hard in this piece. I wanted them to have their emotions twisted and yanked in all directions. And I guess I ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (2 of 4)
Merry_Haven: Yes, it was a car accident. I don't really tell you how because I leave that up to you to decide. I felt it was better that way. And ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: A Whisper in the Wind (1 of 4)
Merry_Haven: Yeah, I really struggled with this one. I mean, I usually make long, novel like things so doing an short piece was really hard for me. But I did ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 10
Dommy65 : Thanks, Dommy! You are so nice! :D Yeah, I wanted to make Isaac more human, more vulnurable because he is compared to Sophia. So I wanted to do ...
Aug 3, 2008
