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Re: The Love Note (ch. 2: The Hospital)
Creepy!! This story gives me the chills! Eeeehh! :? But in a good way! :wink: All right, first the nit-picks. He drew in breath to call out for help, but ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1?
Hey! I have a few nit-picks for you :D It was one of the rare nights you could see every star. It was one of those rare spring-like nights that ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: The story of the unnamed full
All right…this was different than anything I have every read. You have a very unique way to tell a story. Very, very unique. :wink: But that is a good thing. ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 3
Good, very good! :D The only issue I have is the part with her suddenly having a panic attack about being in California. Some of the emotions she was feeling ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 2
Oooo, I have a prediction!! I have a prediction!! I believe that this girl she ran into, who called her a “newbie” is another phantom, another ghost! Am I right? ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 1
Wow, kelsey, just simply wow! I must have a round applause sent to you! *boisterous screams of joy and echoing claps ring in the room* This was a really amazing ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: By Sun, By Moon - Chap. 2
A tense moment for Gen and Jeff, eh? :D I just love how you made the moment be so…so…wolf-like but still kept it human. How he used mating and mate ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: By Sun, By Moon - Chap. 1
Good, as usual kelsey… *sighs heavily* I am going to kidnap your computer one day so I can steal all those wonderful vocabulary words you have there all to yourself! ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 6
KJ Thanks so much! I will make those changes! :D
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Not Quite Conventional
Oh my goodness! This was simply HILARIOUS! I LOVE IT! It is the most adorable, humorous fairy tale I have ever read! Wonderful job! His black hair, accented by long, ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Vertigo
I only caught one thing: There names were Jasper and Kendra Nolus. It should be “Their” instead of “There” Otherwise, very interesting! :D I will keep my eye out for ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: The Love Note
I’m back!! All right, this is good. I mean, you have some mysterious happenings going on here, which make the story all the more attention-grabber. But let me start with ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: My Own Worst Enemy- Chapter 3
Gosh, your story just keeps me wanting more! :D I especially enjoyed when Dani finally stood up to her dad and told him all about his mid-life-crisis! –lol- Love it! ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 6
Scasha : Thanks so much for reviewing! I will make the changes as soon as I can :wink:
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 5
KJ Call me!! But I have two grad parties to go to...if you want to go with?? I guess... I have to ask...but call to remind me!
Jun 19, 2008