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~Kelsey~ I only noticed one thing: His fur was black as midnight, sleek as if it had just rained, and his sinewy muscles moved smoothly as he walked. Don’t you ...

Okay Kelsey, I read your last message on your other chapter, and I guess I understand how your ghost can “feel” the atmosphere and such. But I do think you ...

Again, amazing use of emotions. You really have a way to express people’s emotions. You make it look so easy, using it with ease. :D Okay, well, I only have ...

Sorry it took me FOREVER to put this on here! I've just been preoccupied with other stories at the present time...but I decided to come back to this. Let me ...

bunnie_i_am : Thanks so much for reviewing! :D Yes, I will correct that sentence for you! :wink: Scasha : Wow, very detailed review! Thanks! :D I know, I know, I ...

All right...I need harsh critiques now because this is my first love scene (kind of) in my story, so I need peoples' honest opinions! :D Hope you enjoy it! **Edited ...

Scasha : Don't be silly! Of course I'm going to take your advise. I trust your judgement. Besides, how will I ever improve if I just leave all my stories ...

Sorry it took me so long to put this on here...I've been SUPER busy! Well, here is chapter eight! Happy Reading! :D ____________________________________________________________________________________

Hey scasha! This is my Chapter Six review! :D Oh, the ending of this one really hit me. I really felt for you MC at this moment. You did well ...

JabberHut Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :wink: Day tripper Your review was very helpful! Thank you! :D

Night Mistress: I am working out a totally different thing going on here in the story. I know I kind of went haywire with Sophia's emotions, so I am going ...

Night Mistress : Thanks for reviewing :D And it's not biggy about helping you w/ your story! I love giving other's ideas! :wink:

Hey scasha! This is only a “chapter five” review. I will be posting “chapter six” shortly! Now, as usual, I love it! These kind of stories always make my day, ...

Okay, all I am going to do is copy/paste your entire story and make all my corrections that way. Well, here I go: Mark tried to scream, but as soon ...

Hey Kelsey! It seems that you put some comedy into your story. :wink: I especially thought it hilarious about the honeymoon scene. lol Anyway, I only have a few nit-picks ...