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Veracelle : Umm....okay?? I just want to let you know that my story is NOTHING like Stephanie Meyer's stuff. Also, what right do you have to tell people that it ...

Okay, I know that it has been a long time since I posted a piece from this story, but I think I have reconsidered writing it, so hopefully you all ...

Esme, Esme, Esme Are you always so helpful?? Gosh, thanks so much! :wink: I know, I will really work on expanding this. I wrote this scene kind of fast because ...

day tripper and Alarainya I'm sorry you guys didn't like this chapter as much...but if I made it any longer, it would have bugged people. Also, I wanted it to ...

Alarainya Thanks so much! :D I know, I have had a lot of comments about that. I will be sure to change it.

This was a really humorous story. But it was real. Not many stories are like that anymore. You didn't beat around the bush when it came to things. The only ...

Hey, Melkor! Long time, no see :wink: Anyway, I have your story on my comp because I can't be on the internet anymore (I mean by I copy/pasted your story ...

Iya Ythmir : Thanks so much! :D I will make the corrections as soon as I can!

Wow. Very unique. I'm guessing you are describing, like GryphonFledgling said, a writing project that you worked so hard on, yet never trully finished. Or something like that?? Otherwise, very ...

Okay, I followed your advise and ignored all the caps and (...), which I'm glad I did. Otherwise, I would have been very irked by all those! :P With that ...

Hey, Max! All right, this is really interesting. First, as everyone has pointed out, this is poetry. But if you add a story to this, I think you have a ...

Scasha : Hey! :D Yeah, I know. I'm not used to writing stories in third person, so this is a change for me. Normally, I write in first person, so ...

Yes, I agree with KJ totally. The people above maybe harsh, but they are being honest. They don't mean to be harsh, but they need to be fair when critiquing. ...

dianis97 : Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :D Moriah Leila : I'm glad you like this too. Thanks so much for the corrections. I will make them ...

Abocreature : Huh, that's wierd :? Well, if you figure out what was missing, let me know! :wink: Thanks for reviewing!